One day there was a girl her name was Leia when she was only little she went out to the woods with her dad. She was having such a grate time she started running further and further ahead. An outcome of this was she got lost and was never seen again. Present day... "I was shore I left it here somewhere?" Said Leia as she was still looking in the same part of the forest she had been lost in for the past 10 years However she was quite happy there as she had made lots of friends. the next day she went through a part of the forest she had fond familiar, Leia was going to go further but then she remembered what this part of the forest was. TO BE CONTINUED
A great effort Charlotte! Remember to always proof read your writing before submitting it.